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- Rich Trevorah : This document could be a mandate on his rollrole, whilst Kantara's liaison WG is pending LC formalization.
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- Title should align to the content and body ---hange "CD "to DIS.
- vii: Needs to refer to "by dint of .5 point (v) above"
- Policy Item 1 & 2, change "now embodied" to "maintaining alignment"
- Policy Item 4, delete "and"
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