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Comments:
*1. Line 55 “No requirements found …”
It is entirely unclear what this sentence means. Please restate this in a positive sense so we know who/what these requirements DO apply to.
Editor's Response:
Language updated
2. Lines 80-85 Please rewrite this in English.
Use multiple simple sentences. This is a one-sentence paragraph that is not intelligible.
Editor's Response:
Language updated
3. Add a section at line 86 or line 93
“Revocation – There must be a supported mechanism by which an identity subject can alter or withdraw a previously submitted informed consent.”
Editor's Response:
Language updated
4. Line 139 Add an acronym key to the end of the document
Editor's Response:
Acronym chart added to the end of the document.
5. Make TFET link a live link (in the intro).
Editor's Response:
Agreed. Completed
6. Per list discussion, Sec 2.9 has been removed from the document